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such heavy silence,

heavy as the nits of dust

weighing down the air

 

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~o:37;

 

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early burn this year

'cause March will be illegal

choke on lawful smoke

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What to do -

Grin and bear it -

Or endless Moaning

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Acceptance -

Better than Battle -

Soothes the Soul

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to hear my own cough

echoed by the multitude:

i don't feel better

 

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~o:37;

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too lazy to see the parameters of a Haiku..... but i'll try something.  

 

damp wet lifeless soul

darker than any black

death only wants a hug

 

OMG...i give up

 

 

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1 hour ago, puukao said:

too lazy to see the parameters of a Haiku..... but i'll try something.  

 

damp wet lifeless soul

darker than any black

death only wants a hug

 

OMG...i give up

 

 

You have potential.  It's a shame you are too lazy to learn 5-7-5. 

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3 hours ago, amexpat said:

You have potential.  It's a shame you are too lazy to learn 5-7-5. 

I should say:

 

five syllables line

seven more on the second 

five more like line one

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how to die today ?

by breathing, or, not breathing ?

that's not a question

 

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~o:37;

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Don't winge over fate

The pollution just won't wait

Learn to live with it.

 

 

 

 

 

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