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BANGKOK 22 March 2019 04:51
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the burning season haiku contest begins

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On 2/16/2019 at 10:13 PM, amexpat said:

I moan endlessly 

because you have no idea

of haiku structure

Nit Picking Falang

If not the Weather pick another

Endless Twaddle

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you don't know the rules

then better not play the game

we enjoy ourselves

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Enjoyment for me

Some get it some do not

The human condition

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~

 

being creative:

is that the best way to cure

burning month's malaise ?

 

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~o:37;

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2 hours ago, canthai55 said:

Enjoyment for me

Some get it some do not

The human condition

You're getting closer. Keep trying.

Move one syllable from the last line to the second and you are there. 

 

More fun than bitching about moaning, isn't it? 

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oh my smoky sky

wind today so blue again

smiles all around

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2 hours ago, Dante99 said:

oh my smoky sky

wind today so blue again

smiles all around

I see you are using the Thai pronunciation:  'sa-miles'.  

Clever! 

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Is it fog or smog?
Not clear in the morning sky
Children wonder why..


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Under a red sky

Hansum man cries out again

White mask smells of gin

***

A new infection?

Don't blame the Loi Kroh princess

For your ears, nose, throat

***

Exchange rates crumble

Mountainsides glow orange yet

Still the Brits won't leave

***

Outdoors, world burning

Indoors, he looks for a way

To blame the ex-wife

***

The air is horrid

And the natives are obscene 

But bum gun works well

***

Brand new white face mask 

Gleaming like trousers on an

Immigration cop

***

Prodigious nose hair

Does not filter particles

No matter how thick

***

At last we have found

A universal language

Cough, wheeze, sigh, repeat

***

When Songkran arrives

Wet t-shirts along the moat

Conquer smoke and haze

***

Orang annoyed me

Year after year, then one day

He proposed haiku

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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mirrors say i'm "old:"

the sky says i can't breathe, now;

did i ask for this ?

 

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~0:37;

 

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@Puwa

 

I think, Sir, you have pulled ahead of the pack with this virtuoso recital !

 

cheers, ~o:37;

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I Don't Care if it Rains or Freezes

Long as I got my Plastic Jesus

Sitting on the Dashboard of my Car

 

Math never a strong suit

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just try to get by

devils in the air

without some dirty thoughts

 

~

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