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Kan Win

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One without flash and the other one using the built in flash.

Oly E-5

Lens 12-60mm

Both photos were only re-sized and nothing touch up. However when the final version comes out, it should be much better I think or just a "Flash in the Pan" cheesy.gif so to speak.

No Flash used passifier.gif

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Flash used cool.png

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Thank you for your comments to all that replied.

The flash one looks like a flash picture, it has that artificial light look to it. The other one is better. I would Photoshop that stick out though.

Flash is an artificial light in any camera that has one, so yes it does look like that as you say, but without the flash there is no real / natural light is there? in the foreground that is.

I really like the hanging stick as it does not distract the distant sunset, but give the photo a more natural look about it. Why take nature away from the original photo?

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As a product photographer I always eliminated everything that distracted, I can't help but to do the same with scenics. For me the photo is completed in Photoshop because you can always take it a little bit further. But I realize this is not the purist approach.

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Hi canuckamuck,

Thank you for your C&C and I welcome them. wai.gif

Will think about what you wrote during me final editing version.

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P.S. Still, Nature has it's way, as all my photos are "Thailand as I see it".

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Hi Win

Like the others, I prefer the one with no flash. In general, the human eye is drawn to brighter spots than darker spots. That is what I think happens in your flash picture. If you want to use flash in a situation like that, I would suggest doing what Galen Rowell did to make flash look less like flash. Dial your flash down about 1-3/2 stops. Adds just enough light to bring out some detail without overdoing it. Here is a link to articles he wrote. Look for the one entitled "Smart Flash is Addictive"

David

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I too prefer no flash and removal of the stick. I also feel there is too much dead space in the photo so would probably prefer a little more cropping. Being two dimensional, a photo is never what you see.

All photographs benefit from a little tender loving care in my opinion as it helps to express what the photographer feels as well as what he sees.

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I like the idea of using flash in these situations.

I would try to dial down the flash and add a amber gel for this scene and see how it looks.

A time exposure with some light painting on the foreground with a handheld light can be fun.

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Definitely the one with no flash is better. To my mind it's the sunset after glow that is of interest in these photos.

The illuminated foreground vegetation just detracts from the interesting light in the distance.

Seems to be the general view of posters as well.

Good to know we all have taste isn't it?

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I like the one without flash better. The black foliage serves as a frame around the sunset. You distract the eye from the sunset by popping the flash in the foreground. You could get away with popping the flash and giving the foreground a bit of detail, but I think you'd need to do two things to accomplish that:

1. Pop an off camera flash to give the light a bit of depth

2. Bring the flash down about another stop, so that it doesn't overpower or distract from the sunset.

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non flash

and than photoshop to bring some detail out in the foreground/dark areas

but make sure u try an keep it natural looking

For me; i would zoom in a bit and eliminate the bush in the right foreground as well

Then ur eyes lead you down the river

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Ok, my topic ...

As far as your photos are concerned, they're perfect examples of the limitations of a camera - the brain of the camera will make a serious attempt at exposing both the sky and the darker areas, but in general it will fail miserably because the dynamic range is simply to great.

You could potentially solve these problems, the most common way is to create an HDR. Personally, I'm not to fond of HDR, but that's me.

Your composition makes the use of a flash difficult, but you could have created an awesome photo if you had a subject in the foreground and had that subject lit by flashes. Landscape photography with flash is almost pointless without a subject in the foreground, and impossible with a built in flash. But the big question here is why you would want to capture a night landscape photo without a light source? You can create awesome shots using a powerful torch, or even using your cars headlights. Traditional landscape photography at night tend to focus on capturing the glowing sky, and that's exactly what you've done in your photo, the first being by far the better one.

So, what should you do if you want to use flash in darkness? First of all, get your camera in Manual mode. Forget any type of auto (including Aperture Priority and similar). Most important; get the flash off the camera, which means dont use the built in flash. And secondly (in MY opinion), you need something that sticks out, a subject other than the sky.

The most common reason I see decent night shots amongst most amateurs (in my opinion) is that most photographers have yet to discover the possibilities with off-camera flash in MANUAL mode. Check out David Hobby for inspiration and how he uses flashes and strobes to focus on subjects in night photography. In fact, your photo is very similar to Davids, minus the cellist.

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http://davidhobby.zenfolio.com/

Lastly, keep in mind that with speedlites you can craft your own light. If you combine that with blocking out the ambient light with the shutter speed you can easily create the illusion of night when it is in fact plain daylight.

It all depends what you want to capture.

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